Twixlaria Land: Review

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- Misky

Travels

I spent too long in that sack. At least I had company and a stale roll. When we first were in we screamed and screamed. After awhile of screaming, Feena started crying again, which caused us all to mourn. "How could anybody ever have do this," I thought.
It took us about 1 hours to stop the tears from flowing down our cheeks. After that, we cuddled up and got as comfortable as possible and fell asleep.
We woke up in a small cage, on top of a horse. I awoke achier than ever; my joints were hurting, my muscles were stiff, and I felt gross. The man riding the horse called out, "So ye finally decided to wake up, did ye?" Rist, being the bravest of us, slowly replied, "Why did you capture us?" He smiled a disgusting, rotten smile and said, "Why three little gals from the U.F.D.H. sell for a great price to the elves."
I didn't think living with the elves would be so bad, but I had forgotten their saying, "If you join our side, may you not change your mind." Which is basically telling people if you decide to become an elf, you aren't changing back into a human. "Actually selling ye gals to the ghouls could make meh a better profit," He said dully. I think he was just trying to scare us, because I don't know how ghouls would acquire any money.
Eventually the horse stopped right next to a forest. The strange man tied our wrists together and took us into the group of foliage. The place had a calming feeling to it. Finally, we got to an elvish village. The man called out to the elves. One elf jumped out from a tree and stared at us. He gave the man twenty milth coins and untied us. The elf then inspected us and said this, "They'll be good elves, if they can pass the test.

- Zinx

Death

I was rushed into a medical tent, barely able to see. It was my second time in the tent, and probably not my last. I noticed a clean slice on my hand as I was placed on a rusty bed. The doctor started to stitch the cut and whispered, "No blood huh, hope he'll survive this time."
Tears rolled down my face as I noticed my veins glowing. "It's almost to his heart!" The doctor yelled. Then, I fell into a different realm, just darkness... darkness..... A masked figure stood in front of me; I was looking Death in the face.
He put his hand up but a bright figure appeared behind him who resembled my sword. The bright figure slowly whispered, "No today," and I snapped back into reality. My body was completely healed (yes, I mean my scars and arm) accept for the cut on my hand. The doctor had wide eyes as if he saw a ghost. "Y-y-you just survived a fatal blow that has killed anyone I've worked on," he said.
I smiled and grabbed my sword. "I think I'll keep this sword," I replied. I then ran back out onto the battlefield.

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